Darwaze Ke Chhed Ne Dikhayi Jannat

Meri umar 18 saal hain mein juj saab ke yahaan bagicha mein kaam karta hoon,bagicha ka poori dekh rekh ,rakh rakhav Kallu Ustaad ke jimma hain ,kallu 40 saal ka aadmi hain jo juj saab ke yaha 10 saal se kaam kar raha hain, suna hain kallu kisi jurm ke silsala mein jail ke saaza kaat raha tha ,juj saab ke meharbaniyon ke vajah se vah azaad ho paaya is liya usna apna baaki jeevan juj saab ko samarpit karna ka faisla kiya, kallu ke shaadi nahi hue ,shayad he koi ladki ussa shaadi karna chaha ,uska chahara par kai jagah choora se kata nishaan hain,vo ek dum kaala hain,shakal se he koi samajh jayage ke mujrim raha hogaa ,uska shaarir ekdum loha jaisa mazboot hain aur vo bahut takatvaar hain, bada bada gamlon ko jinaha do aadmi bhe mushkil se uthata hain vo asaani se akalay utha leta hai.

Agar koi ladki usa ek nazar dekha le to usa aisa laga ke kisi balaatkaari mujrim ke saamana khadi hai,is liya kaam vaali baiyan ussa bahut darti hain,vo jaj saab ka vafaadaar hain, mein kallu ka assistant hoon , juj saab kareeb kareeb 55 saak ke adhaad hain aur unhona der se shaadi ke ,par unka koi bachha nahi hain par juj saab ke biwi Kusum 28 saal ke jabar kayamat hain, asal mein. kusum memsaab ko phool bahut pasand hain isliya juj saab na ya bagicha banvaya taaki unki bagum khoobsoorat phoolo ke beech rah. saka, roj subah jaj saab aur kusum memsaab bagicha mein tehalna aata hain, kusum memsaab bahut khoobsoorat hain, vo kisi sangamarmar mein tarashi hue ajanta ke moorat jaisi hain,sabsa khoobsoorat unka nitaamb hain jinaha mein taktaki lagakar aksar dekhta rahata hoon.

Mein kabhi kabhi kalpana mein unha nangi dekhta hoon aur unka nitambon ko choomta hua muth maar leta hoon par mujha yakeen hain ke unka goora nitamb meri kalpana se kahi jayada mast honga, juj saab ke kismat ke is budhapa me unka land ko itna sundar nitambon ka saath mila hain,kusum memsaab aksar mujhpar aur kallu ustad par chilati hain ke hum kaam thik se nahi karta,har kaam mein vo nuks nikalti hain,chaha hum jitni bhe mahanat kar le huma dat he milti hain ,bechaara kallu haat joda khada rahata hain aur daat khata hain par choo tak nahi karta, mujha bhe kabhi kabhi gussa aa jata hain par mein dopahar ko unha yaad karkar apna gussa thanda kar leta hoon,huma dopahar ko 12 se 5. tak ke chutti rahati hain,jis time main soota hoon aur memsaab ko yaad karta hoon,ek din dopahar ko mujha neend nahi aa rahi the kyonki juj saab dilli gaya hua tha aur unhona mujha dhyan rakhna ko kaha tha.

To main ghar ke charon taraf ek chakkar marna nikal gayaa,bagicha jahan khatam hota tha vahan se juj saab ke kothi shuru hotee the ,is taraf ek darwaaza tha jo kusum memsaab ke snaan ghar ka tha jo band rahata tha ,snaan ghar ka dosra darwaza kusum memsaab ke kamra mein tha jahan se vo pravesh karti the nahana ke liya, mein jab vahan se guzaara to mujha kuch siskiyon ke awaaz ayee, mein dheera se darwaza ke paas gaaya aur kaan laga kar sunna laga, siskiyan kusum memsaab ke he the, ab isa meri khuskismati ya badkismati kahiya us darwaaza mein ek choota sa ched tha , maina ghabda kar chaaron taraf dekha aur fir himmat karka jahkna laaga, meri saasa tham gayee us nazaara ko dekhkar,kusum memsaab poor nangi khadi the aur unhona apna bada aur pyaara nitamb bahaar kar rakha the aur kallu apni kaali kaali aur mooti ungiliyon se unki nitambon ke undar jaanch kar raha tha.

Pehle usna ek ungli daali aur kusum memsaab kasmasa uthi fir doosri daali, to aah ke awaaz nikli, fir kaalu apni ungiliyon ko ghoomana laga dheera dheera, beech beech mein vo kusum memsaab ke nitambon ko kaat leta jispa kusun memsaab muskara kar uska baalon ko pyaar se sahalana lagti, fir kaalu utha aur usna apna bada sa saaman bahar nikaala, baap re mein to dar gaaya dekh kar,6inch ka kaala baas jaisa moota aur pathaar jaisa mazboot land jisa dekh kar kusum memsaab ek pal ke liya jhapi par unka chahara ke muskurahaat dekhkar aisa laga ke kallu aur unka milan pehali baar ka nahi hain ,aisa pehala bhe ho chuka hain,kusum memsaab apni dum kallu ke taraf karka khadi ho gayee aur apna nitambon ko bahar ke taraf. nikal liya, kaklu na apna khatarnaak samaan pe thoda sa sabun geela kar ke laga liya, kaala sa land ab jhak safed dikhna lage.

Fir usna dhera se apna land ko kusum memsaab ke nitambin ke daraar mein pavaasth kiya,kusum memsaab jor se cheekhi par kallu bhe ustaad tha usna kusum memsaab ke kamar mein haath ghuma liya aur jor se pakad liya,ab kusum memsaab ke paas kaalu ke khatarnaak land ko apna nitambon mein bardash karna ke sivaya aur koi chaara he nahi tha,kallu jor jor se khudai karna laga aur kusum memsaab kasmasate gayee,20 minut tak kallu ka land kusum memsaab ko parashen karta raha aur kusum memsaab siskiyan leti rahi,kallu unka nitambon par aur chipkata gaaya aur phir dheera dheera uski raftaar thamna lagi,aakhir mein uska muh se ek gaandi se aah nikali aur kusum memsaab ke chehara par ek tripti ke lehar daud gayee,kusum memsaab ne usa muskara kar dekha aur tauliya lepat ker sandaas kamra ke taraf chalee gayee, mai bhaaga vaha se aur seedha apna kamara mein aa gaaya,turant apna land nikal kar muth maara,pehali baar itna anand ayaa mujha “Jannat”.

Shaam ho gayee mera man udaas hain ,mein kabhi kallu ustad ko maaf nahi karoonga,vaisa to unka ahsaanmand hu ke unki vajah se mujha kusum memsaab ko nangi dekhna ka avsaar mila par is taraha mein nahi chahata tha,ya duniya badi ajeeb hain,yahan dikhta kuch hain aur hota kuch hain,kya kusum memsaab ko kallu he mila is sab ke liya, gaon mein kyan smart ladka nahi the ke kallu se he marvaana tha, par unki bhe gakti nahi hain, auraat sulabhta dhoondti hain aur kallu sa jyaada sulabh aur kya tha,maina apni potli bazndh le ,ab aur nahi rah sakta yahan mein,juj saab nahi lauta , mem saab mera intezaar kar rahi the hall mein,maina chooti ke arzi de the ,mujha laga tha ke vah mujha datangi par aisa nahi hua, unhone mujha 200 rupiya diya aur mera baalon ko sahalata hua kaha jaldi aana,mujha bahut acha laaga, maine kusum memsaab ko maaf kar diya aur kaalu ko bhi. Kahani padhne ke baad apne vichar niche comments me jarur likhe, taaki hum apke liye roz aur behtar kamuk kahaniyan pesh kar sake – DK

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